Talk:Bicycle light generator
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Your simple circuit analysis is very good. However, it might be nice if you could explain what your results of mean in the context of the product. It might also help if your equations were a little easier to read. | Your simple circuit analysis is very good. However, it might be nice if you could explain what your results of mean in the context of the product. It might also help if your equations were a little easier to read. | ||
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Revision as of 23:42, 15 February 2007
Additional Comments
It would be useful if some of your conclusions were drawn together into an executive summary.
Your simple circuit analysis is very good. However, it might be nice if you could explain what your results of mean in the context of the product. It might also help if your equations were a little easier to read.
Your FMEA seems a little lacking, and it might help if it were arranged in a more formal format.
