Talk:Car jack
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In your executive summary you mention that you have been able to gain a significant background in the product and see areas where improvement is possible. However, it would be very useful if you could actually list these opportunities, and present your conclusions in the executive summary, so that they could be easily and quickly be understood. | In your executive summary you mention that you have been able to gain a significant background in the product and see areas where improvement is possible. However, it would be very useful if you could actually list these opportunities, and present your conclusions in the executive summary, so that they could be easily and quickly be understood. | ||
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| + | Your disassembly page is wonderfully complete, and your pictures of the process under way is quite informative. However, when you have pictures of the pins being ground off, and the result after, it is unclear what the pins looked like before they were ground off. I realize it is impossible to take a picture now, however, if you have an old picture of these parts attached to the jack, it might be useful to post them. | ||
Revision as of 23:01, 15 February 2007
Additional Comments
In your executive summary you mention that you have been able to gain a significant background in the product and see areas where improvement is possible. However, it would be very useful if you could actually list these opportunities, and present your conclusions in the executive summary, so that they could be easily and quickly be understood.
Your disassembly page is wonderfully complete, and your pictures of the process under way is quite informative. However, when you have pictures of the pins being ground off, and the result after, it is unclear what the pins looked like before they were ground off. I realize it is impossible to take a picture now, however, if you have an old picture of these parts attached to the jack, it might be useful to post them.
