Talk:Paper shredder
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While you have shown a great deal of detail in your investigation of our product in it's various stages, you are lacking a unifying front page tying together your findings. It should summarize the various aspects of your research simply, presenting the data in an easy to ready format. Your individual sections should also feature short summations. For example, your section on components should have a short preface explaining what materials predominated your product, and how they were made. You might also consider making an appendix in which to place your large charts, leaving only the preface on the main page.
