Talk:Remote control tarantula
From DDL Wiki
(Difference between revisions)
Current revision (10:45, 1 October 2007) (view source) |
|||
| Line 8: | Line 8: | ||
* The FMEA just lists a data table - there is some interesting analysis work here, but what are your conclusions? | * The FMEA just lists a data table - there is some interesting analysis work here, but what are your conclusions? | ||
* The LCA is interesting. Does the analysis suggest that the majority of greenhouse gasses are emitted during the manufacturing or use phase? | * The LCA is interesting. Does the analysis suggest that the majority of greenhouse gasses are emitted during the manufacturing or use phase? | ||
| - | |||
* We look forward to seeing your next report. | * We look forward to seeing your next report. | ||
Current revision
We received your report, and we are impressed with your findings. Detailed comments follow:
- Please include a picture of the product at the top of the document
- The executive summary is nice, but please put your findings and recommendations from your analyses up front
- Excellent discussion of customer needs
- Excellent documentation of product functionality. Please explain the gear ratio equation - why does gear E not cancel?
- In the parts list it is difficult to identify separate parts for images where all parts are included together.
- Interesting thoughts on DFMA - there are some good ideas to consider pursuing.
- The FMEA just lists a data table - there is some interesting analysis work here, but what are your conclusions?
- The LCA is interesting. Does the analysis suggest that the majority of greenhouse gasses are emitted during the manufacturing or use phase?
- We look forward to seeing your next report.
